[Application] James David [Denied]

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[Application] James David [Denied]

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State Fire Marshal Application

Section 1: Personal Information
1.1 Title: Mr
1.2 Forename(s): James
1.3 Surname(s): David
1.4 Other name(s): N/A

1.5 Date of Birth: 31/01/1999
1.6 Weight: 163 lbs
1.7 Height 5 ft 9 ins

1.8 Primary place of residence: Pink Cage Motel Room 21, Los Santos, San Andreas
1.9 Contact Number: 45763440
1.10 Email Address: [email protected]

Section 2: Educational History
Please list and elaborate on, in the space hereunder, the entirety of your formal education history, including details of qualifications:
  • Name of High School: Stuyvesant High School
    Year of graduation: 2019

    Name of College/University (or N/A): New York University
    Year of graduation: 2022

Section 3: Employment History
Please list below your entire employment history, including your most recent agency service.

3.1 Most recent agency affiliation: N/A
3.2 Rank held: N/A
3.3 Tenure: N/A

3.4 Please list any further affiliations or employment hereunder, including position and tenure:
  • N/A
3.5 Please list hereunder reasons for dismissal within previous employment:
  • N/A

Section 4: Medical History
Please list and elaborate on, in the space hereunder, any medical conditions you may have. In addition, please elaborate on any sections of your medical record which may hinder your ability to conduct your duties.
  • No medical conditions.

Section 5: Licensing, Permits and Legalities
5.1 Are you in possession of a valid Driver's License? Yes
5.2 Are you a lawful citizen of the State of San Andreas? Yes
5.3 Please list hereunder any other licenses or permits you are in possession of: N/A

Section 6: Declaration
Replace and complete as appropriate the information hereunder:
On submitting this application, I, James David, understand and confirm that all questions herein were responded to with truthfulness and integrity. I give my permission for the recruitment team to investigate, and to clarify, the information given, for the purpose of validation of this application. I acknowledge the fact that any plagiarism, perjury, or alteration of the contents within this document will result in the application being rejected, and a life-long ban from future applications to the Office of the State Fire Marshal.
Name (print):James David
Name (signed):James David
Date: 22/12/2022
(( Section 7: OOC Information ))
7.1 Forum name: Refreshanu
7.2 Geographical location and timezone: Europe/Bucharest GMT+2
7.3 Character ID: 109724
7.4 Discord username: Refresh#3514
7.5 Please list languages in which you may be fluent in, alongside English: Romanian

7.6 How long have you been roleplaying on GTA:W, and roleplaying in total? On GTA:W for 4 days. Roleplaying in total: 3 years.

7.7 Please provide an unedited screenshot of your entire admin record: ACCESS
7.8 Please provide an unedited screenshot of your character statistics summary: ACCESS

7.9 Please write your character's background story:
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James came from the poor side of Liberty City, more exactly, Bohan, he didn't had an easy life there his family was poor, they were barely making 600$ a month, just a bit above the life expanses there. The Bohan borough being notorious for it's high crime rates, drug dealing problems and the low police activity around there. James being a honest and smart man, he studied like crazy to get out of Bohan, he even worked part time during his high school period to help his family with money for paying the bills and to bring food in the house.

However, he made it to Broker, not a big upgrade, but it's something better for him and his family. After he moved, his mother died due to cancer, James, is severely affected by his mother's death, he wants to get a very good paying job and make sure his family will have everything they want and be blessed with no dieseases and live a long life. But these dreams we're destroyed when his dad got in a car crash and ended up in hospital in a coma. Now James maintains a good life for his father and sister. Bohan made him a very tough person and a fighter. After some time he started going to university, started studying about construction and fire safety of buildings. James got a part time job to pay for his tuition, but he got lucky and got a scholarship because his hard work and good grades. James chose this path because he wanted to protect people and make them feel safe in their own houses and in the business they we're visiting. He tries very hard everyday to protect everything he loves. He even started working full time after finishing university to try and move out of Liberty City.

Finally, James gathered enough money in his account, he moved in Los Santos for a fresh start. He had choosen Los Santos because of the greater opportunities, warmer weather and bigger chances for him to create a family. After some time spent in Los Santos he recieves the greatest news he could recieve, his dad woke up from his coma and was feeling a lot better, that meaning his sister could find a place to work and help their dad with money and pills. James keeps wiring money to them as a proof that he succeded in this state.
7.10 Fingerprint sample: * James David provides a sample of all of their fingerprints to the Office of the State Fire Marshal at their Rockford Hills HQ on 22/12/2022.

7.11 Drug test: * James David conducts a drug test at the SFM Rockford Hills Headquarters on 22/12/2022. It returns negative.
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Re: [Application] James David [Received]

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State of San Andreas
City of Los Santos
Recruitment Division
Office of the State Fire Marshal


APPLICATION RECEIVED
Dear James David,

Thank you for your interest in the Office of the State Fire Marshal. Your application has been received, acknowledged, and is currently undergoing scrutiny and evaluation from our recruitment team. This process may take up to 72 hours. If, after this time frame, you have not received an update, please feel free to contact me through email (( Forum PM )) and I will rectify the error as soon as possible.

Kind regards,

Division Chief Vincenzo Calvani
Field Operations Command
Canine Handler
Recruitment Officer
Office of the State Fire Marshal

Division Chief Vincenzo Calvani
CANINE DIVISION
RECRUITMENT & TRAINING
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Re: [Application] James David [Pending]

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State of San Andreas
City of Los Santos
Recruitment Division
Office of the State Fire Marshal


APPLICATION PENDING
Dear James David,

Thank you for your interest in the Office of the State Fire Marshal. Following extensive evaluation by the recruitment team, we have found your application not conforming to our standard. We offer you the ability to rectify the issues listed below and request you to do so within 72 hours.
  1. (( Section 7.9: The background story does not meet our expectations. Edit your background story significantly, since there is no information about his school career in his background story. It should also be added how he managed to finance his studies despite the limited financial resources of his family. Furthermore, it should be explained what he studied at the university. Also, his personality should be explained more in detail in the background story. The attack on his father should be explained more and how James got into this situation. Likewise, it should describe why he shows interest in this profession and what encouraged him to choose it.))
Once rectified, please notify me by replying to this email (( Post a reply to this topic )).

Kind regards,

Division Chief Vincenzo Calvani
Field Operations Commander
Recruitment Officer
Office of the State Fire Marshal

Division Chief Vincenzo Calvani
CANINE DIVISION
RECRUITMENT & TRAINING
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Re: [Application] James David [Pending]

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Vincenzo Calvani wrote: Sun Dec 25, 2022 8:55 pm




State of San Andreas
City of Los Santos
Recruitment Division
Office of the State Fire Marshal


APPLICATION PENDING
Dear James David,

Thank you for your interest in the Office of the State Fire Marshal. Following extensive evaluation by the recruitment team, we have found your application not conforming to our standard. We offer you the ability to rectify the issues listed below and request you to do so within 72 hours.
  1. (( Section 7.9: The background story does not meet our expectations. Edit your background story significantly, since there is no information about his school career in his background story. It should also be added how he managed to finance his studies despite the limited financial resources of his family. Furthermore, it should be explained what he studied at the university. Also, his personality should be explained more in detail in the background story. The attack on his father should be explained more and how James got into this situation. Likewise, it should describe why he shows interest in this profession and what encouraged him to choose it.))
Once rectified, please notify me by replying to this email (( Post a reply to this topic )).

Kind regards,

Division Chief Vincenzo Calvani
Field Operations Commander
Recruitment Officer
Office of the State Fire Marshal

I've modified the specifed aspects.
Regards,
James David.

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Re: [Application] James David [Denied]

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State of San Andreas
City of Los Santos
Recruitment Division
Office of the State Fire Marshal


APPLICATION DENIED
Dear James David,

Thank you for your interest in the Office of the State Fire Marshal. Following extensive evaluation by the recruitment team, we have decided to not move forward with your request for employment with the Office of the State Fire Marshal on account of the following issues:
  • (( Character story is still lackluster and not up to par with our expectations. ))
You are welcome to re-apply after 1 month of this notice being issued. We wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors.


Kind regards,

Division Chief Vincenzo Calvani
Field Operations Command
Recruitment Officer
Recruitment Division
Office of the State Fire Marshal

Division Chief Vincenzo Calvani
CANINE DIVISION
RECRUITMENT & TRAINING
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Enforcing the San Andreas Fire Code since 1885

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