[Application] Steve Limberg [DENIED]

[Owen Santora]

State Fire Marshal Application

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Section 1: Personal Information

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1.1 Title: Mr
1.2 Forename(s): Steve
1.3 Surname(s): Limberg
1.4 Other name(s): N/A

1.5 Date of Birth: 05/JAN/1999
1.6 Weight: 158 lbs
1.7 Height 5 ft 8 ins

1.8 Primary place of residence: 6371 Apache Rd, Westminster, Orange County, SA 92683
1.9 Contact Number: 55847231
1.10 Email Address: [email protected]

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Section 2: Educational History

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Please list and elaborate on, in the space hereunder, the entirety of your formal education history, including details of qualifications:

• La Quinta High School (10372 W McFadden Ave, Westminster, SA 92683) - High School Diploma (History) - 08/SEP/2014 to 15/JUN/2018

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Section 3: Employment History

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Please list below your entire employment history, including your most recent agency service.
3.1 Most recent agency affiliation: Uber
3.2 Rank held: Driver
3.3 Tenure: 0 years, 7 months ( 09/DEC/2022 - Still active)

3.4 Please list any further affiliations or employment hereunder, including position and tenure:

• 3.1 Agency affiliation: 24/7 (15991 Magnolia St, Westminster, SA 92683.)
  3.2 Rank held: Cashier
  3.3 Tenure: 1 year, 0 months ( 26/MAR/2019 - 04/APR/2020)
  
  3.1 Agency affiliation: Walmart (13331 Beach Blvd, Westminster, SA 92683.)
  3.2 Rank held: Department Manager
  3.3 Tenure: 2 years, 7 months (04/JUN/2020 - 09/DEC/2022)
  
  3.1 Agency affiliation: Los Santos Fire Department.
  3.2 Rank held: Fire candidate.
  3.3 Tenure: 0 years, 0 months ( 27/MAY/2023 - 11/JUN/2023)

3.5 Please list hereunder reasons for dismissal within previous employment:

• 24-7 - Resignation
  Walmart - Constructive Dismissal.
  Los Santos Fire Dept. - Resignation

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Section 4: Medical History

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Please list and elaborate on, in the space hereunder, any medical conditions you may have. In addition, please elaborate on any sections of your medical record which may hinder your ability to conduct your duties.

• * I suffered a right knee injury and a torn cruciate ligament. I would also advise these past injuries will not affect my ability to work at SFM and could confirm it by passing a medical examination.

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Section 5: Licensing, Permits and Legalities

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5.1 Are you in possession of a valid Driver's License? Yes.
5.2 Are you a lawful citizen of the State of San Andreas? Yes.
5.3 Please list hereunder any other licenses or permits you are in possession of:

• N/A

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Section 6: Declaration

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Replace and complete as appropriate the information hereunder:

On submitting this application, I, Steve Limberg, understand and confirm that all questions herein were responded to with truthfulness and integrity. I give my permission for the recruitment team to investigate, and to clarify, the information given, for the purpose of validation of this application. I acknowledge the fact that any plagiarism, perjury, or alteration of the contents within this document will result in the application being rejected, and a life-long ban from future applications to the Office of the State Fire Marshal.

Name (print): Steve Limberg
Name (signed):
Date: 20/JUL/2023

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(( Section 7: OOC Information ))

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7.1 Forum name: Iglesias
7.2 Geographical location and timezone: France, UTC+2
7.4 Discord username: Santinowm
7.5 Please list languages in which you may be fluent in, alongside English: I'm a French native speaker.

7.6 How long have you been roleplaying on GTA:W, and roleplaying in total? I joined the server last year but have been active for three months, after leaving the French GTA: World server.

7.7 List ALL current and past character names. Include faction and rank if applicable.

• Steve Limberg
• Gabriel Bárcenas - Mongols MC
• Owen Santora (Don't remember my last name on all of those characters.)

7.8 Please provide an unedited screenshot of your entire admin record: Access
7.9 Please provide an unedited screenshot of your character statistics summary: [url=blob:https://imgur.com/955133d5-082b-4bcc-b2e8-c8abf7b25498]Access[/url]
7.10 Please write your character's background story (Minimum 250 words.):

[SHOW]

Steve Limberg was born on the 5th of January 2000 in Westminster, a city in Orange County, San Andreas. He grew up in Westminster, living between Los Santos and Orange County. When born, he was the baby of three brothers; David was twenty-five, Walter was eighteen, and Paul stood fifteen on the birth of Steve. His parents, John and Tina, were both 44 at his birth. His parents were working at the time in Los Santos, John was a dentist, and Tina was then a nurse. Meanwhile, David had already finished his law studies, as Steve joined the family; Walter then graduated from high school and wanted to join the US Marines Corps as a medic. Paul was still learning at high school and was disposed to follow his dad's footsteps to become a dentist.

You have noticed that Steve grew up in a peaceful and comfortable living environment. You may also have understood that his parents have consistently pushed their kids to combine their studies with their passion, promoting them to become diplomats from great colleges. Knowing about his parent desire, Steve tried to suit the assignments provided by his parents, attempting to graduate as a doctor or a nurse to help out his community. Growing up and being influenced by fire departments and their constant need to maintain and secure their localities, Steve thought about joining a fire department when he grew up.


After graduation from High School, Steve was even more determined to become part of the Orange County Fire Department. He tried to come through the tryouts, failing twice, before deciding to delay his wish to join the department due to a recent accident during a football game at his high school, which complicated his trials and caused him to fail them.

Still dreaming of joining a fire department, he worked in different places to raise capital. His first employment was at a 24/7, where he worked as a cashier. The "24/7" was located five blocks away from his place. Keeping in mind the dream to become a firefighter, he decided to run every day from his home to the market before coming to his house to perform his physical ability and recover from his injury. He also paid gym membership to prepare his body for the duty he might face when joining his future ideal career.

After two years of working in a grocery shop, Walmart's human resources manager offered him a position as a department manager in a supermarket in Westminster. Since the proposition rendered a better remuneration contrary to his prospective employer, he decided to leave his post at 24/7 and accepted Walmart Inc's proposal as a department manager. While working at Walmart, he kept doing his routine, running from his place to his new market work and working at his gym.

After two years working for Walmart Inc, Steve was exceeded by his job due to an underemployed team and accompanied and overworked shifts, making him burn out. After a few months, he resigned from Walmart and reflected that he was even more determined to make his dream come true. His bank account was still in the red; Steve chose to work for Uber as a driver in Los Santos for a year to bring back his bank account in the green. His extra work thus allowed him to see the tremendous work accomplished by various departments working during night shifts. It led him to push the doors of the LSFD in 2023. His relatives trusted him and helped him as much as possible by offering funds to move into LS to fulfill his dream.

After passing the different tests, He joined the LSFD academy. Afterward, Steve Limberg changed his mind after discovering San Andreas Marshal's work and missions. He was then well aware of SFM being his dream job. He then left the LSFD academy and decided to move on to his new dream of becoming a San Fire Marshal.

7.11 Fingerprint sample: * Steve Limberg provides a sample of all of their fingerprints to the Office of the State Fire Marshal at their Rockford Hills HQ on 21/JUN/2023.

7.12 Drug test: * Steve Limberg conducts a drug test at the SFM Rockford Hills Headquarters on 21/JUN/2023. It returns as negative.

[Aoife Voss]

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State of San Andreas
City of Los Santos
Recruitment Bureau
Office of the State Fire Marshal

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APPLICATION RECEIVED

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Dear Steve Limberg,

Thank you for your interest in the Office of the State Fire Marshal. Your application has been received, acknowledged, and is currently undergoing scrutiny and evaluation from our recruitment team. This process may take up to 72 hours. If, after this time frame, you have not received an update, please feel free to contact me through email (( Forum PM )) and I will rectify the error as soon as possible.


Kind regards,

Aoife Reilly
Probationary Recruitment Officer
Recruitment Bureau
Office of the State Fire Marshal

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[Liam Madison]

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State of San Andreas
City of Los Santos
Recruitment Bureau
Office of the State Fire Marshal

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APPLICATION PENDING

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Dear Steve Limberg,

Thank you for your interest in the Office of the State Fire Marshal. Following extensive evaluation by the recruitment team, we have found your application not conforming to our standard. We offer you the ability to rectify the issues listed below and request you to do so within 72 hours.

1. Section 1.3 - Provide your surname(s).
2. Section 1.4 - This section is for you to provide any other legal names you may have. If you don’t, leave it as “N/A”. Surnames are not written in capital letter either; only the first letter is.
3. Section 1.5 - Double-check your date of birth. According to our records, you are 22 years old. (( You can either amend the date of birth or age up your character by a year. ))
4. Section 3.3 - Specify your tenure in years and months.
5. Section 3.4 - All prior jobs before becoming an Uber driver must be stated here instead of Section 3.3. Be sure to specify your tenure as well in years and months.
6. Section 4 - (( SFM does not have its own doctors. We are a law enforcement agency. This part of the application is IC; therefore, the applicant is expected to state their medical condition if they have one. It is not meant to be a /do emote. ))
7. Section 6 - Only the first letter of the surname must be written in capital letters. Amend your surname on the declaration and on the name (print).
8. (( Section 7.8 - Amend the BB code. Whenever you click on the link, it sends you to a 'not found page'. Add the link like this:

   Code: Select all

   [url=LINK_HERE]Access[/url]

   Moreover, amend the actual screenshot so we can see the “full record”. ))
9. (( Section 7.9 - Incorrect screenshot provided. Go in-game and type /stats. Take an unedited screenshot of your screen and submit that instead. Furthermore, amend the BB code. Whenever you click on the link, it sends you to a 'not found page'. Add the link like this: ))

   Code: Select all

   [url=LINK_HERE]Access[/url]

10. (( Section 7.10 - Expand on why Steve suddenly wants to become a Deputy Fire Marshal. In addition, you state that his family provided him funds to move to LS, but in Section 1.8, his legal address is in Orange County. Which is it? Amend the inconsistency. Finally, please amend the grammar in your text. I have a few examples for you:
    • “twenty-fifth” instead of “twenty-five”.
    • What do you mean by “stood fifteen”? Do you mean Paul was fifteen years old when Steve was born?
    • Avoid writing in conditional. We would not have noticed or understood anything. You are telling us Steve’s story.
    • You don’t pass a high school diploma. You pass or complete high school and get a diploma.
    • What do you mean by “harsh stain”? Are you referring to his struggle?
    • What do you mean by “biannual”? That it happens every two years? I think you meant to say that Steve worked at Walmart for two years.
11. (( Section 7.11 - Only the first letter of the surname must be written in capital letters. ))
12. (( Section 7.12 - Only the first letter of the surname must be written in capital letters. ))

Once rectified, please notify me by replying to this email (( Post a reply to this topic )).

Kind regards
Liam Madison
State Fire Marshal
Office of the State Fire Marshal

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[Owen Santora]

Correctness done.

[Liam Madison]

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State of San Andreas
City of Los Santos
Recruitment Bureau
Office of the State Fire Marshal

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APPLICATION RECEIVED

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Dear Steve Limberg,

Thank you for your interest in the Office of the State Fire Marshal. Your application has been received, acknowledged, and is currently undergoing scrutiny and evaluation from our recruitment team. This process may take up to 72 hours. If, after this time frame, you have not received an update, please feel free to contact me through email (( Forum PM )) and I will rectify the error as soon as possible.


Kind regards,

Liam Madison
State Fire Marshal
Office of the State Fire Marshal

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[Ella Adams]

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State of San Andreas
City of Los Santos
Recruitment Bureau
Office of the State Fire Marshal

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APPLICATION DENIED

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Dear Steve Limberg,

Thank you for your interest in the Office of the State Fire Marshal. Following extensive evaluation by the recruitment team, we have decided to not move forward with your request for employment with the Office of the State Fire Marshal on account of the following issues:

• ((You amended some of the required changes, but not all of them. For example: Section 1.5: You changed the year of birth, yet you didn't change your characters actual age through /attributes ingame. Section 7.8: BB code was amended, but you didn't provide a screenshot of your FULL admin record. Section 7.9: BB code is messed up completely. Section 7.10: You worked on your background story and made some changes, but you're still using the conditional writing style, witch is a big no-go.))

You are welcome to re-apply after 1 months of this notice being issued. We wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors.


Kind regards,

Ella Adams
Director of Recruitment
Recruitment Bureau
Office of the State Fire Marshal

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